Your introduction is thorough and effectively paced, but I disagree that the primary theme of this text or this passage is related to gender roles. Although gender plays a minor role in this text, I would stress that issues relating to power, social class, art and the artist are at the forefront of this story. You provide some good analysis, and have a strong sense of Munro as writer, but could achieve greater accuracy and greater precision with a clearer sense of theme and by using more specific evidence from the text to justify your ideas.
Effective organization and strong use of language.
Your introduction is thorough and effectively paced, but I disagree that the primary theme of this text or this passage is related to gender roles. Although gender plays a minor role in this text, I would stress that issues relating to power, social class, art and the artist are at the forefront of this story. You provide some good analysis, and have a strong sense of Munro as writer, but could achieve greater accuracy and greater precision with a clearer sense of theme and by using more specific evidence from the text to justify your ideas.
ReplyDeleteEffective organization and strong use of language.